Joyful Nightmares, poem |
 Mar 6 2005, 09:55 PM
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God send me twisted dreams
of bloody picnic scenes. Send me visions of angels who've lost their wings and demons in playground swings. Grant me my demented gaurdians of the night. Through joyful nightmares grant me flight... After months of writer's block, this felt good to write. Sweet dreams... |
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Mar 8 2005, 02:29 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
^ Agreed. :D
Very nice! It got to the point and it flowed well. Nice work. [= |
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[Mediocre]Artist Joyful Nightmares Mar 6 2005, 09:55 PM
stephinika short, to the point...it rhymes in a good way. i l... Mar 6 2005, 09:58 PM Paradox of Life I love it. It's dark, evil and almost humorous... Mar 7 2005, 07:45 PM thatgirlmarcy ya that poem was really good and instead of puttin... Mar 9 2005, 09:12 PM
xd0rkette i like it. it's short.. but it rhymes and has ... Mar 9 2005, 09:39 PM [Mediocre]Artist QUOTE(xd0rkette @ Mar 9 2005, 8:39 PM)i like ... Mar 10 2005, 09:51 PM |
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