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 Mar 8 2005, 01:04 AM
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 Philly Girl 4-life  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772  |
In her world of shattered mirrors
light and day die.. with no love to dearer her mind lets her see... The past beyond me her ears let her hear what god is to fear her mind becomes stronger but she feels no longer her soul becomes dead as she lies in her bed and as the night comes to take her, even love can not wake her..... |
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Mar 8 2005, 01:23 AM
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nicely done...good rhyming, doesn't sound very forced. i like it. sounds almost like a poem i wrote before...keep up the good work.
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potmonkeyjd Shattered Mar 8 2005, 01:04 AM
--{Empty}-- I really like the way you put together the words f... Mar 8 2005, 01:25 AM |
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