another rap by me, jason aka kangsta aight foo? Options

[*Statistik*]

You callin me a racist boy
here's a reminda
why does 50 say the n word if he black u whore
i know he aint wack but he still tight more
im a korean and i aint actin black
i just like gangsta rap so shut up and watch yo back
u bunch of faggots
say i cant rap
well at least i dont talk like a jap
konichiwa, imma a hunt u downnnn
dont stare at me cuz u look like a lil inncent clownnn
im rich as hell 5000 cash fallin down when it rings da bell
u have no life collectin ja rule cd's and u about to sell
dont get cocky dont get worried cuz i wont tell
u cant rap fo yo life and i mean it kid
my lines are hot and i know you've seen it kid
ur so stupid dat u cant rhyme
1 line i read from ur sh*tty rap is a waste of ma time
that he had to get words from rhymezone dot com
u should quit rap cuz ur mama's ashamed of you
u have no job and all u do is work at a chinese fung choo take out
and all u earn is a buck an hour
that aint no gangsta power
my crib is big, my kicks are rich
dont act like a b*tch

[Paradox of Life]

Since appearantly this is targeted at the people who put you down on your previous rap, I'm going to post again. Truthfully, I think this rap is worse than your first. It has even more hostility when there really is no need for hostility. Being overly defensive about your "rap" could mean a lot of things like insecurity or low self-esteem or whatever, but the truth is you need to admit that you're lines not "hot". That's the only way you'll improve. You can't discriminate the whole population of people who like Ja Rule (I have one of his CD's ). I think you're the one who needs to be giving people respect. Just in this one "rap" you've called someone a whore, a faggot, and insulted them in several other ways.

why does 50 say the n word if he black u whore

Don't say, "the n word", that's just plain stupid. Period.

well at least i dont talk like a jap
konichiwa, imma a hunt u downnnn

At least I don't talk like a jap? What the hell is that supposed to mean!? Who's being racist? Whoever that's calling you racist is right!

Alright, I'ma just calm down now. I don't know what to say after reading this. Whether I should continue supporting your interest or if I should tell you... You do not want to tell this to the public! They will not be happy! You think your lines are hot? Insulting your readers/listeners is a not. Even if it's impersonal.

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AND RHYMEZONE IS COOL!