just some shizzle |
 Mar 5 2005, 02:09 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
She’s living, dying proof
I am a slave to this feeling This ecstasy This forbidden art no one can master My heart and mind lay in her palm Her fist clenched tight I want them back I need them back right now All the sweat I wish I’d never shed Will drip a hole into my forehead In this hell that she and I erected Why did I let my guard down? You expected anything less than mixed feelings? I hate you, you selfish, maleficent jezebel Drown in your morbid liquor of my tears Liquor of my tears I melted for you With your frozen heart Glimpses of your smile were a treasure All but not, forever buried, in the sands of your apathy I was a rose that sawed off my thorns You made me dry up and be gone with the wind After you stomped on and spat on my dry pedals |
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Mar 5 2005, 02:20 AM
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oh i thought you changed style to sound like snoop dog.. i as like NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
GJ... its a long time since ive heard some one say jezebel |
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ryfitaDF just some shizzle Mar 5 2005, 02:09 AM
ryfitaDF ^ hahaha. i should definetly write a rap. hehe Mar 5 2005, 02:25 AM wind&fire ^ i think ive said that to you before... and you w... Mar 5 2005, 02:26 AM stephinika lol interesting title...but yeah, i liked it. grea... Mar 5 2005, 04:01 AM
azn_r4pf4n QUOTE(stephinika @ Mar 5 2005, 1:01 AM)lol in... Mar 6 2005, 03:16 PM MyVermilionPlague Wow, that was very, very good.
Word Choice - 100%... Mar 8 2005, 02:25 AM Kathleen *Cough* NICE SIGNATURE. Hehe. Nice poem, too. Mar 9 2005, 06:39 PM solomontang hey kathleen, i think your really really hot cuzi ... Mar 9 2005, 09:55 PM Gypsy Eyes ^wtf? haha
very nice, like always. your poetry is... Mar 11 2005, 06:49 PM |
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