one look at you |
 Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM
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 aNNa BaNaNa >.<  Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,244  |
I havent written a poem recently... i posted one up of a poem i wrote a long time ago... i guess I'll make on up right now.
one look at you and a flood of memories drown me crumbling what i finally started to build. my heart would beat fast again like raging drums within me and silent tears would flow I could have sworn i gave up on you but no... you are here haunting my thoughts wherever i go. an inner struggle tears me up inside a part wants to run to you and never give up and the other wants to pack my bags ... leaving you. YOU seemed to have moved on, then why is it is so hard for me? so many fish in the sea... and you already caught by another... i should just throw my hook in and hope for the best. if it only were that easy... the only solution is to blind my heart and keep it away from one look at you... -me sorry its not my best... i just dont feel like editing it right now. tell me what you think |
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Mar 4 2005, 03:23 AM
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wow, it's so strong...i can almost reach out and touch it. good job!
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korbana05 one look at you Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM
BitterSweetness you're really talented yea...that poem is ki... Mar 1 2005, 11:30 PM korbana05 ^.^ thank you! yah... i can only do okay when ... Mar 1 2005, 11:39 PM stephinika very emotional...i like it. one thats easy to rela... Mar 1 2005, 11:53 PM islandgirl4eva God, this one really touched me. I've been thr... Mar 2 2005, 12:15 AM --{Empty}-- An instance that happens too often, as unfortunate... Mar 4 2005, 12:50 AM yukichan wow that was good... Mar 4 2005, 02:17 AM
njgurl412 oh gosh .. this poem is really good. Mar 4 2005, 09:04 PM |
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