aother title-less poem, i never give mine titles, i dont like it |
 Mar 3 2005, 12:51 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
the queen of hearts she baked som tarts
you threw them back in her face the knave of hearts he stole those tarts you helped him on his way peter gave you pixie dust you took it up your nose tinkerbell danced round your head you tore of her wings santa climbed down the chimney you lit a fire in the hearth rudolph waited on the roof you stuck his antlers on the wall i tired to love you you tore me down i made you laugh you made me weep everyone would die for you you would watch and laugh and now its done |
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Mar 4 2005, 02:14 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow...i didnt get it at the beginning..lol..i like it...
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racoons > you aother title-less poem Mar 3 2005, 12:51 PM
RiddleMeWonders I do like the beginning... the end seems hurried, ... Mar 3 2005, 03:26 PM picaso_smile I think someone's a little angry... but its go... Mar 3 2005, 08:28 PM stephinika i love the creative flow that just comes from all ... Mar 3 2005, 08:38 PM --{Empty}-- Liked how you lead into the different characters. ... Mar 4 2005, 12:30 AM racoons > you QUOTEdo like the beginning... the end seems hurrie... Mar 7 2005, 03:59 PM RiddleMeWonders Yes? Well hurried ending or not, it's still fa... Mar 7 2005, 04:14 PM
KissMe2408 hey i had no idea you could write! lol, but i ... Mar 8 2005, 04:08 AM |
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