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 Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
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enchantment
bewitchment and trickment or treatment for the sickness and the weakness and the selfless and the crying those who know us say we're lost as we've no homes but we know that we live on the wind |
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Mar 3 2005, 12:06 AM
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Hm, I like your ending, and the verses are put together well, I too don't get what you're trying to get at but maybe this was one of those spur of the moment pieces, tell me if I'm wrong but haha but it's good nonetheless
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racoons > you yet anotehr peom Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
rockstermonkey I really like it. It really focuses on the change ... Mar 1 2005, 12:11 PM stephinika kind of simple but i like it, especially the begin... Mar 1 2005, 07:55 PM TreesTurnMeOn Yes..tis simple. But I like it. I didn't know ... Mar 1 2005, 09:53 PM racoons > you its about feeling lost, but people trying to cure ... Mar 3 2005, 11:47 AM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Feb 28 2005, 5:37 P... Mar 3 2005, 03:28 PM
picaso_smile *Gasps! So simple. Yet so true. I like it mu... Mar 3 2005, 08:26 PM |
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