People See Me, Another Poem :) |
 Mar 1 2005, 10:06 PM
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 Philly Girl 4-life  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772  |
People see me, people care,
Yet they try to avoid my stare. My family trys, yet not hard enough. They push and push me but, towards what? I don't have a future and don't need one now. My fate is chosen, I don't know how. All I know is what I've been told. That my soul has been taken and sold. People see me, people stare. What they don't know is that I have to care... |
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Mar 3 2005, 12:02 AM
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I like the idea and thought you brought out in that piece, the simplicity makes it easy to understand what you're trying to say along with easily used to relate to the issues in each other person's life. That's the main reason in which I like your piece.
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potmonkeyjd People See Me Mar 1 2005, 10:06 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy hmmm i like it i think its good man goood stuff XD Mar 1 2005, 10:16 PM TreesTurnMeOn Woah. I really really like that. Its simple..but I... Mar 1 2005, 10:30 PM
rOckThISshYt QUOTE(TreesTurnMeOn @ Mar 1 2005, 11:30 PM)Wo... Mar 1 2005, 11:01 PM stephinika i like it. simple, but has a good point. Mar 1 2005, 11:52 PM potmonkeyjd Thanks fro replying, im glad you all enjoyed this.... Mar 3 2005, 10:23 PM Spiritual Winged Aura 10/10 .. i think that's me because no one does... Mar 3 2005, 11:02 PM potmonkeyjd I'm Sorry You feel that way, but you aren... Mar 8 2005, 12:45 AM |
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