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 Mar 2 2005, 04:00 PM
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alli  Group: Member Posts: 513 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,108  |
yah so ive never posted on this writing section b4..but i wrote like a short quote..and i wanted to see if you guys like it..so here it is!
sometimes i feel like my lifes a novel. sometimes a fairytale, a mystery, or a story with a twisted ending. But no matter what, the story goes on and eventually it comes to an end. even if you dont want it to. its kinda short..and i think i need to fix it up a lil.but just tell me if you like it |
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Mar 2 2005, 07:28 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
I think the quote is true and I liked it, but I believe there are better ways for you to word it. I love writing quotes. I have a whole bunch of them.
But it's not too short. I would actually make it shorter. I duno.. I just like short but good quotes. |
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alli my short quote.. Mar 2 2005, 04:00 PM
rockstermonkey I do like the message, but I think that it could b... Mar 2 2005, 10:13 PM korbana05 >.< I like it!! *claps*
-- you coul... Mar 2 2005, 11:41 PM --{Empty}-- Haha, I wish I could come up with a quote. I like ... Mar 2 2005, 11:58 PM stephinika wow...i really like it. great comparison, and its ... Mar 3 2005, 12:00 AM
salcha wow, that is true.
but true love never has an endi... Mar 4 2005, 03:22 AM |
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