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 Mar 1 2005, 08:52 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
So..I dont know if its a poem or not. I just wrote it in class because it was the only way to keep me from screaming.
I keep smiling even when I'm screaming inside Because these things drive me crazy I have no choice but to hide Force a smile And blink away the tears Im supposed to be strong Supposed to have no fears But I'm finding it so hard Not to frown Im such a strong person Why am I breaking down? But you know Im alright You know Im just the kind of girl That feels so hurt and smiles Though ever collapsing is my world I don't do escuses I don't ask why Its just a breakdown It happens all the time Don't yell in my face Don't EVEN try You wanna help me? Just let me cry Yeah I love you all my life But you don't even know A thing I feel inside Know by the Look in my eye Please....even if its a lie To keep these tears from being cried.. Tell me I'm fine |
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Mar 2 2005, 03:21 PM
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That's extremely powerful. I really liked that one. There was a lot said in such a short period of time, very well done. Quite enjoyed it and it's very easy to relate to from many many perspectives. Keep it up
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TreesTurnMeOn As of yet..untitled Mar 1 2005, 08:52 PM
rOckThISshYt I loved that. I love the emotion. You made it real... Mar 1 2005, 11:07 PM stephinika i loved it. sounds exactly like something i'd ... Mar 1 2005, 11:54 PM korbana05 *applause* i feel that ALL the time (the feeling l... Mar 2 2005, 12:04 AM TreesTurnMeOn Eek! Thanks. ^_^ Mar 2 2005, 08:00 AM urfaceisaRAPEscene wow girl that such an awesome poem!!!
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x3__iGiVEup ^I dont see how the relationship between the song... Apr 10 2005, 04:21 PM |
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