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 Mar 1 2005, 08:52 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
So..I dont know if its a poem or not. I just wrote it in class because it was the only way to keep me from screaming.
I keep smiling even when I'm screaming inside Because these things drive me crazy I have no choice but to hide Force a smile And blink away the tears Im supposed to be strong Supposed to have no fears But I'm finding it so hard Not to frown Im such a strong person Why am I breaking down? But you know Im alright You know Im just the kind of girl That feels so hurt and smiles Though ever collapsing is my world I don't do escuses I don't ask why Its just a breakdown It happens all the time Don't yell in my face Don't EVEN try You wanna help me? Just let me cry Yeah I love you all my life But you don't even know A thing I feel inside Know by the Look in my eye Please....even if its a lie To keep these tears from being cried.. Tell me I'm fine |
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Mar 2 2005, 12:04 AM
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 aNNa BaNaNa >.< Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,244 |
*applause* i feel that ALL the time (the feeling like breaking down and having the want of others to just leave you alone and yet sometimes you kinda want them there... and you just want things to be alright)... yah. And how you put it... no other words could be said truer than those... good job!
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TreesTurnMeOn As of yet..untitled Mar 1 2005, 08:52 PM
rOckThISshYt I loved that. I love the emotion. You made it real... Mar 1 2005, 11:07 PM stephinika i loved it. sounds exactly like something i'd ... Mar 1 2005, 11:54 PM TreesTurnMeOn Eek! Thanks. ^_^ Mar 2 2005, 08:00 AM --{Empty}-- That's extremely powerful. I really liked that... Mar 2 2005, 03:21 PM urfaceisaRAPEscene wow girl that such an awesome poem!!!
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x3__iGiVEup ^I dont see how the relationship between the song... Apr 10 2005, 04:21 PM |
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