People See Me, Another Poem :) |
 Mar 1 2005, 10:06 PM
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 Philly Girl 4-life  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,772  |
People see me, people care,
Yet they try to avoid my stare. My family trys, yet not hard enough. They push and push me but, towards what? I don't have a future and don't need one now. My fate is chosen, I don't know how. All I know is what I've been told. That my soul has been taken and sold. People see me, people stare. What they don't know is that I have to care... |
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Mar 1 2005, 10:30 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Woah. I really really like that. Its simple..but I dont know why I like it so much. Great job!
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potmonkeyjd People See Me Mar 1 2005, 10:06 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy hmmm i like it i think its good man goood stuff XD Mar 1 2005, 10:16 PM
rOckThISshYt QUOTE(TreesTurnMeOn @ Mar 1 2005, 11:30 PM)Wo... Mar 1 2005, 11:01 PM stephinika i like it. simple, but has a good point. Mar 1 2005, 11:52 PM --{Empty}-- I like the idea and thought you brought out in tha... Mar 3 2005, 12:02 AM potmonkeyjd Thanks fro replying, im glad you all enjoyed this.... Mar 3 2005, 10:23 PM Spiritual Winged Aura 10/10 .. i think that's me because no one does... Mar 3 2005, 11:02 PM potmonkeyjd I'm Sorry You feel that way, but you aren... Mar 8 2005, 12:45 AM |
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