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Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
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![]() Another ditch in the road... you keep moving ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
enchantment
bewitchment and trickment or treatment for the sickness and the weakness and the selfless and the crying those who know us say we're lost as we've no homes but we know that we live on the wind |
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Mar 1 2005, 09:53 PM
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![]() Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Yes..tis simple. But I like it. I didn't know you wrote..but then agian..I haven't been here in a while >.<
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racoons > you yet anotehr peom Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
rockstermonkey I really like it. It really focuses on the change ... Mar 1 2005, 12:11 PM
stephinika kind of simple but i like it, especially the begin... Mar 1 2005, 07:55 PM
--{Empty}-- Hm, I like your ending, and the verses are put tog... Mar 3 2005, 12:06 AM
racoons > you its about feeling lost, but people trying to cure ... Mar 3 2005, 11:47 AM
RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Feb 28 2005, 5:37 P... Mar 3 2005, 03:28 PM
picaso_smile *Gasps! So simple. Yet so true. I like it mu... Mar 3 2005, 08:26 PM![]() ![]() |