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 Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
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enchantment
bewitchment and trickment or treatment for the sickness and the weakness and the selfless and the crying those who know us say we're lost as we've no homes but we know that we live on the wind |
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Mar 1 2005, 07:55 PM
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kind of simple but i like it, especially the beginning. keep it up.
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racoons > you yet anotehr peom Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
rockstermonkey I really like it. It really focuses on the change ... Mar 1 2005, 12:11 PM TreesTurnMeOn Yes..tis simple. But I like it. I didn't know ... Mar 1 2005, 09:53 PM --{Empty}-- Hm, I like your ending, and the verses are put tog... Mar 3 2005, 12:06 AM racoons > you its about feeling lost, but people trying to cure ... Mar 3 2005, 11:47 AM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Feb 28 2005, 5:37 P... Mar 3 2005, 03:28 PM
picaso_smile *Gasps! So simple. Yet so true. I like it mu... Mar 3 2005, 08:26 PM |
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