I feel it now.., this thing called sorrow.. |
 Feb 21 2005, 08:28 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
He broke up with me last night.. funny, though, I think, because I knew it was going to happen.. I just had that feeling... like a tourniquet tied around my heart that kept pulling tighter and tighter.... I wrote this just before he called:
I feel the love.. and I feel the strain And I know that if I don't tell you I'll break without a sound Here.. It's so clear.. And so blinding at the same time We can't do this, But... a kiss I think will do just fine. Where are we? What did I do wrong? The things we didn't say We felt when we got home I'm so sorry, but please... Please, don't let me go.. Or, have I already lost you? This is what I don't know.. Because I feel the pain... Oh am I too late? Things are going wrong Even as I'm writing this song... I don't want to move on. To just be your friend yet.. To just forget it... I want to stay with you.. Isn't there anything I can do? I can't bear to lose you...... |
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Mar 1 2005, 12:44 AM
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QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Feb 21 2005, 6:28 AM) I'll break without a sound  I like that line... mostly cause that's what happens to countless people, and nobody every really knows in the end all cause its silent. Unfortunate. But it happens. At any rate. Hope you're doin ok 
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RiddleMeWonders I feel it now.. Feb 21 2005, 08:28 AM
stephinika i like it. you can see the emotion in your words. ... Feb 21 2005, 08:57 AM smthngcrprategrl34 its good. i understand what your going through. we... Feb 22 2005, 10:02 PM rOckThISshYt Ahhhh... A poet who can see the truth before thems... Mar 1 2005, 12:16 AM
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