I feel it now.., this thing called sorrow.. |
 Feb 21 2005, 08:28 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
He broke up with me last night.. funny, though, I think, because I knew it was going to happen.. I just had that feeling... like a tourniquet tied around my heart that kept pulling tighter and tighter.... I wrote this just before he called:
I feel the love.. and I feel the strain And I know that if I don't tell you I'll break without a sound Here.. It's so clear.. And so blinding at the same time We can't do this, But... a kiss I think will do just fine. Where are we? What did I do wrong? The things we didn't say We felt when we got home I'm so sorry, but please... Please, don't let me go.. Or, have I already lost you? This is what I don't know.. Because I feel the pain... Oh am I too late? Things are going wrong Even as I'm writing this song... I don't want to move on. To just be your friend yet.. To just forget it... I want to stay with you.. Isn't there anything I can do? I can't bear to lose you...... |
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Mar 1 2005, 12:16 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
Ahhhh... A poet who can see the truth before themselves. One quality of a good poet is to be able to see someone's emotion. Even though it wasn't through poetry, you knew it was happening. Although the circumstances sad, great job.
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RiddleMeWonders I feel it now.. Feb 21 2005, 08:28 AM
stephinika i like it. you can see the emotion in your words. ... Feb 21 2005, 08:57 AM smthngcrprategrl34 its good. i understand what your going through. we... Feb 22 2005, 10:02 PM
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