The Perfect Girl..., A poem to my one and only |
 Feb 28 2005, 10:58 PM
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 Why is life such a burden?  Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,737  |
Yay poetry I luv poetry anyway here is my poem.
THE PERFECT GIRL When I see you, you make my day. When I talk to you, you cheer me up in every way. When we hold hands, you make me love you even more. When you hug me, you make my love for you soar. When you kiss me, you fill my heart with joy. For all these reasons, I am luckiest to be your boy. |
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Feb 28 2005, 11:46 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
Awww... I think that's so sweet. Most guys aren't man enough to write poetry. I think only the real men are those who show emotion and aren't afraid to express themselves. Great job!
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123Shot The Perfect Girl... Feb 28 2005, 10:58 PM
kokosofly Aw that's sweet!
Wish someone would write... Feb 28 2005, 11:25 PM 123Shot Ty all! Ya I like writing poetry...some of the... Mar 1 2005, 12:24 AM stephinika cute. a bit cliche, but it is sweet. Mar 2 2005, 03:12 PM
123Shot TY steph.... Mar 3 2005, 02:03 AM |
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