no title, rap Options

[*Statistik*]

I'm from north jersey
and i aint ashamed of that
to be exact your the first one
who opened up a fortune cookie that ur a losa
nobody can stop me
until they cop me
jump outta yo seat and drop da damn beat man
wheres my meat dawg im about to bust yo head wide open
this is the best moment
im the next eminem
matta fact, your da next r.kelly
dont make me spit in your mouth
ill take u down from west to south
yeah im korean and i got no problem wit it
you gotta problem well dont get mad cuz they can rap too
if you think you can beat me your just a plain ol foo
who is jason kang?
well im about to make history man
make one comment about rice or taek won doe
ill get my crew to blow your ass
man stop rappin u smell like air gas
u rap like a retarded jew
and i bet u already knew

-Jason aka Kangsta

[Paradox of Life]

o_O; No offense to asians, I'm asian. I take Tae-Kwon-Do and I eat rice, but that kinda sucked. Rap isn't just this trashy talk that rhymes. Rapping is an art and your "rap" doesn't even have any rhythm or anything.

wheres my meat dawg im about to bust yo head wide open

What poetic value does that have? What the heck does it mean? Why do you want meat? And why are you trying to bust someone's head open?

make one comment about rice or taek won doe

Wasn't that already used by some other asian rapper? That said something like, "Make one comment about rice or karate, LAPD will be in Chinatown looking for your body, etc".

Um, sorry for my brutal honesty, it's just a habit. There's much more I would critique on but I think I'd best be shutting my mouth. I think you're off to a good start and I'll give you your props for your interest. I'm not like totally into rap (but I am a poet) so maybe my taste is just different.

Clever with the Kangsta combination or your last name and stuff..

Good luck.