Dave, a poem I wrote |
Dave, a poem I wrote |
Feb 25 2005, 02:00 AM
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Dave
Little boy, Lost in the big bad world Trying just to make it out alive. Can’t save himself, I tried. But he wants to save himself. Full of Jack D and coke, I cried to him, Begged him not to pull the trigger. He walks around my neighborhood now, Half dead, half alive. I tried to save what’s left of his soul, But he wanted to save himself. Cigarette smoke filled the air, As I pleaded with him, To love me, and save him. He did neither, He still walks around my neighborhood, Now he's not alive, A ghost for a soul, A slave for a body. I could never save him, He wouldn’t let me try. That’s why the love of my life, Tried so hard to die. |
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rockstermonkey I really like it. Great job! Really takes the ... Feb 25 2005, 10:40 PM
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