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 Feb 24 2005, 06:09 PM
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"With peer pressure being so strong in schools these days, advice given to an individual would help that person become a stronger person. Teens go through peer pressure every day, and it influences their life, although they may not know it. Advice one might give to another is to assure them that in the end, everything is going to be alright. Peer pressure is all around us. It is like a journey filled with happiness, sorrow, and lessons learned. Things may not look up for you when you're feeling down, but it's not always going to end that way."
That's my introduction..My teacher said I needed a thesis. Help anyone? Thanks MUCH. |
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Feb 24 2005, 06:59 PM
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A thesis needs to introduce the points that you will write about in later paragraphs. So with that in mind, what are the points or ideas that you'll address in the essay?
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Feb 24 2005, 07:35 PM
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 asdfghjkl; Group: Member Posts: 187 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,038 |
QUOTE(uninspiredfae @ Feb 24 2005, 3:59 PM) A thesis needs to introduce the points that you will write about in later paragraphs. So with that in mind, what are the points or ideas that you'll address in the essay?  yeh... it basically sums up your essay in one or two sentences. |
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sweetdreamsx3 Thesis Feb 24 2005, 06:09 PM
alli its a specific statement that sums up the hole pap... Feb 24 2005, 07:41 PM smilz2dasun well, what exactly are you trying to prove? like w... Feb 24 2005, 08:41 PM monde libre eh, the intro paragraph seems a little disorganize... Feb 25 2005, 11:48 AM mzawesome ^^ wow u sound so smart ehehe didnt get anything y... Feb 26 2005, 04:41 AM sweetdreamsx3 You may close this. My essay was already submitted... Feb 26 2005, 05:21 PM
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