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Rachel
post Feb 24 2005, 03:44 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale.
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this is an older poem as well. i tried a different style. i don't really like it that much. it doesn't really relate much to me _unsure.gif

Moments are many things
They are: wonderful,
life changing,
dramatic,
shocking,
breathtaking,
and sometimes great.

But some moments
ones such as this,
they are hard to accept,
are tough to get through,
and feel as though
they last for eternity.
When really it’s over
in just a few seconds.

Just a few seconds
and anything could happen.
Everything I wanted and loved
was taken from me.
Why moments like these
are happening to me,
I don’t know why.
Why you are gone
in just one moment
I cannot, will not
ever understand.
 
 
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racoons > you
post Feb 24 2005, 03:58 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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^^

i know what you mean... its not bad, its just not... good

lol im a little vague sometimes
 

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