Death Day, Poem |
 Feb 24 2005, 01:03 AM
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 Entropic  Group: Member Posts: 216 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,522  |
This is for my dad
 Constructive critism please Happy Death Day I miss you, sometimes too much To hug you, would be a gift-like gods touch My tears, are full of selfishness My fears, are nothing but memories missed Taken from my curling hand. Clutched so tight-like making glass from sand. Please know I am okay and I know i'll see you one day Know that I love you, and I will come what may, Till I see you again, Happy Death Day. -Tainted_Faerie '05 R.I.P 2/24/85 |
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Feb 24 2005, 02:58 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
Wow that's sucha touching poem.
I bet your dad will love it if he knows about this site in heaven/hell haha... Anyways you remembered your own dad's death day... I don't think I remember few of my close friend's death day... wow... you're good at memorizing. I like the to hug you part... that's really cute and sweet-sounded. Whoa 1985?!?! How old are you now?................ Then he died when you were a baby, huh? If so, that's very sad... hope you feel better. Well how can you feel better when someone's dead already. But just feel better and not think of death. Think happy thought! It's good for you hehehe. . . |
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tainted_faerie Death Day Feb 24 2005, 01:03 AM
Programmer awww...i feel you...i miss my dad to..... Feb 24 2005, 05:30 AM Kill_Drake the rhyming seems a bit awkward, maybe you should ... Feb 24 2005, 01:54 PM
RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(Kill_Drake @ Feb 24 2005, 1:54 PM)the r... Feb 24 2005, 03:27 PM
tainted_faerie QUOTE(Kill_Drake @ Feb 24 2005, 1:54 PM)the r... Feb 24 2005, 06:01 PM cynicalstitch I never really lost a loved one to death...I shoul... Feb 24 2005, 08:41 PM c0oki3_m0n$tah i love that poem! so touching! Feb 24 2005, 10:21 PM stephinika hmm...i love the concept, very touching. Feb 24 2005, 10:23 PM |
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