here's my first poem on cb, hope you like it |
 Feb 22 2005, 09:55 PM
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ok, this probably will sound stupid, but it's what i felt at the moment:
I asked him if he really loved me, And then I was left in darkness My mind was blank My heart stopped beating My eyes pooled and burned My cheeks grew firey hot I couldn't move my feet, They were cemented to the ground I looked at him with disbelief He looked at me with a puzzled look Memories of pleasure started to run through my head As if I were watching them on film Little drops of tears Whisper of the pain I felt The power of NO got to me He said it with a strong, serious face, The power of NO killed me. |
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Feb 24 2005, 01:36 AM
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 This is all my luck, it's all I got. Group: Member Posts: 1,373 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,532 |
I really like this poem. Its so nice.
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Led-Zeppelin Lover here's my first poem on cb Feb 22 2005, 09:55 PM
cynicalstitch aww..
that's a sweet poem.. Feb 22 2005, 10:15 PM tainted_faerie I really like this poem...really. xx Feb 24 2005, 01:19 AM Programmer wow...deep Feb 24 2005, 05:30 AM angel-roh Yeah like what he said... very deep. It's like... Feb 24 2005, 03:08 PM
Led-Zeppelin Lover thanx you guys for the nice compliments...i'm ... Feb 24 2005, 10:16 PM |
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