You Never Knew, .... because I never told you... |
 Feb 18 2005, 04:15 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
You never knew I loved you
You never knew at all You never knew I saw you As you continued to love the wrong You never knew I wished for you the happiness I'd never have You never knew I kissed your memory As I lay down in my bed No; You never knew I loved you. We set the patterns unknowingly For the way we express our feelings the thoughts of actions and dealings Contemplating whether to take or leave The redeeming lilly We set the patterns unknowingly I never told you how I loved you. I never considered the cost of not doing so I never showed you my heart for fear of the breaking This would be my worst mistake making I never tried to jump after love Instead I watched you fall and rise slowly I never told you how I loved you. |
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Feb 22 2005, 10:05 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's good. i read it and i relate to it. and it pointed out to me all the things that i didn't do that i should have that i can't fix now. i agree with Sa-Chan. don't stop writing!
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RiddleMeWonders You Never Knew Feb 18 2005, 04:15 PM
Kathleen Aww that was good. That's exactly how I feel t... Feb 18 2005, 05:46 PM sweetdreamsx3 Whoa....great writer. That's the same in somet... Feb 18 2005, 05:54 PM stephinika lovely. easy to relate to too. great job. Feb 19 2005, 01:34 AM Sa-Chan I read this...and I did something about my life. T... Feb 19 2005, 09:55 PM rOckThISshYt wonderful.... Mar 1 2005, 12:17 AM
--{Empty}-- Hurrrmmm... I like cause its very clear, and stra... Mar 1 2005, 12:40 AM |
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