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*mishyerr*
post Feb 21 2005, 08:59 PM
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Well, She knows She knew it;
She knew it all along;
She promised herself so many promises
That were broken all along.
Swiftly dancing upon the wind,
She'll hold onto his hands,
But he's just a shadow,
Made from imagination.
Oh, sweet rapturing nights
Of kisses not yet kissed
Of sweet words not yet whispered
Of Her own delicate lips.
She knew that this
The fragile thing her breast contained
Would break into
A shattered, frozen time.
She broke it.
She broke it.
She broke it.
 
 
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avalon*
post Feb 21 2005, 09:00 PM
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NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16.
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great diction =] and i love the repetition. man i sound like an english teacher. lol.
 

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mishyerr   She   Feb 21 2005, 08:59 PM
avalon*   great diction =] and i love the repetition. man i ...   Feb 21 2005, 09:00 PM
stephinika   well done. i like the concept/idea behind it...ver...   Feb 21 2005, 11:34 PM
islandgirl4eva   OMG...Michelle, this is absolutely beautiful. I lo...   Feb 22 2005, 12:45 AM
smthngcrprategrl34   really good! love the concept. it's great   Feb 22 2005, 10:00 PM


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