rain on valentine's day |
rain on valentine's day |
Feb 19 2005, 02:22 AM
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LunchboxXx ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
RAIN ON VALENTINE’S DAY
This deck of cards has been stacked against us With all the hearts removed Just spades for your use to dig into my flesh Inject me with sorrow, encase me in pain The vultures circle me as we speak The sky darkens above The storm is born as our heaven weeps The rain falls on this Valentine’s Day We’ve cried each other enough rivers To widen this canyon tenfold Our every dream Beckoned by the grave Forced smiles are all that I can muster anymore As plastic as the tube the plasma runs through The euphoria I once saw Became a disaster in the making Our hypnotic remembrance The duress of our memories Put our ashes in a heart-shaped urn The rain falls on this Valentine’s Day We’ve cried eachother enough rivers To form this dreary sea Spread across our globe of sentiments Most of which we dare not chart I grow weary of staying here In this state of confusion I’ll miss you You c**t |
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Feb 20 2005, 03:09 PM
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LunchboxXx ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE You open your mind to a whole different plane when you write. You see from above, and then below... You're like a camera that gets every angle of the story. you're really good at making me happy about my stuff QUOTE Don't be sorry!! I'm the one that's sorry. I wasn't thinking ahead about this was how you were feeling, and I didn't really have a right to give my view on that. I don't know...I was just coming from the opposite end of the spectrum, because being a girl, I was kind of the one tossed in the gutter as you put. I know, that a lot of my stuff is pointing blame towards guys or well, a guy, and no one's ever said anything about that. I'm sorry, once again. I dunno...it just upset me a bit?? Please don't be sorry or upset with me, I really wasn't meaning any harm by it. Also, have you told the girl how you feel? Or...told her what she did to you was wrong?? it's all good. you can replace it with, like, "pig" or somthing that refers to a guy. |
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ryfitaDF rain on valentine's day Feb 19 2005, 02:22 AM
MyVermilionPlague I LOVE the word choice.
Excellent job, as always.... Feb 19 2005, 03:37 PM
Sa-Chan This was beautiful...I was to the point of tears. ... Feb 19 2005, 09:44 PM
Kathleen ^ Heh. Trust me, he has every reason to feel that ... Feb 19 2005, 11:41 PM
ryfitaDF i sorry =[. but i needed to put that there. the gi... Feb 19 2005, 11:42 PM
Sa-Chan QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Feb 19 2005, 11:42 PM)i sorr... Feb 20 2005, 12:16 PM
helllla jankyyyy Woah. I really liked it. Soo good. =] Feb 20 2005, 01:25 AM
RiddleMeWonders You open your mind to a whole different plane when... Feb 20 2005, 09:00 AM
BitterSweetness you're talented... Feb 20 2005, 12:42 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Feb 18 2005, 11:22 PM)Forced... Feb 21 2005, 12:02 AM
smthngcrprategrl34 brilliant...absolutely brilliant. Feb 22 2005, 10:09 PM
TrUePaInX nice....very good u left me speechless....nothin m... Feb 22 2005, 10:14 PM
PAULiNE_x I loved this..
xo, Pauline Feb 27 2005, 04:36 PM![]() ![]() |