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rain on valentine's day
ryfitaDF
post Feb 19 2005, 02:22 AM
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RAIN ON VALENTINE’S DAY
This deck of cards has been stacked against us
With all the hearts removed
Just spades for your use to dig into my flesh
Inject me with sorrow, encase me in pain
The vultures circle me as we speak
The sky darkens above
The storm is born as our heaven weeps
The rain falls on this Valentine’s Day

We’ve cried each other enough rivers
To widen this canyon tenfold
Our every dream
Beckoned by the grave

Forced smiles are all that I can muster anymore
As plastic as the tube the plasma runs through
The euphoria I once saw
Became a disaster in the making
Our hypnotic remembrance
The duress of our memories
Put our ashes in a heart-shaped urn
The rain falls on this Valentine’s Day

We’ve cried eachother enough rivers
To form this dreary sea
Spread across our globe of sentiments
Most of which we dare not chart
I grow weary of staying here
In this state of confusion
I’ll miss you
You c**t
 
 
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ryfitaDF
post Feb 19 2005, 11:42 PM
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i sorry =[. but i needed to put that there. the girl this is about and i were slowly drifting apart, then she just abruptly tossed me in the gutter, so i think it's just what the somg called for. and, also, theirs only so much emotion that can come from just the words. i have to admit, i was writign it to the music of avenged sevenfold's song "i won't see you tonight pt. 1", and, if you've ever heard the song, you'd know that the most tear-jerking parts were the guitar solos and the bridge, incorperating piano and strings. i was thinking i'd try and let the music to this song do most of the talking. sorry, again.
 
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post Feb 20 2005, 12:16 PM
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QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Feb 19 2005, 11:42 PM)
i sorry =[. but i needed to put that there. the girl this is about and i were slowly drifting apart, then she just abruptly tossed me in the gutter, so i think it's just what the somg called for. and, also, theirs only so much emotion that can come from just the words. i have to admit, i was writign it to the music of avenged sevenfold's song "i won't see you tonight pt. 1", and, if you've ever heard the song, you'd know that the most tear-jerking parts were the guitar solos and the bridge, incorperating piano and strings. i was thinking i'd try and let the music to this song do most of the talking. sorry, again.
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Don't be sorry!! I'm the one that's sorry. I wasn't thinking ahead about this was how you were feeling, and I didn't really have a right to give my view on that. I don't know...I was just coming from the opposite end of the spectrum, because being a girl, I was kind of the one tossed in the gutter as you put. I know, that a lot of my stuff is pointing blame towards guys or well, a guy, and no one's ever said anything about that. I'm sorry, once again. I dunno...it just upset me a bit?? Please don't be sorry or upset with me, I really wasn't meaning any harm by it.

Also, have you told the girl how you feel? Or...told her what she did to you was wrong??
 

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