sunset beach, also a poem... |
 Apr 9 2004, 03:29 PM
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 x mar muffins *yuuuum  Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620  |
 a poem I wrote a few weeks ago... dedicated to michael |
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Apr 11 2004, 01:07 AM
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x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
:biggrin:wow, thanks everyone for the wonderful feedback, I wrote this poem for my language arts class, and I even showed it to the guy I wrote it about, at first he didn't get what I was saying, and then he got it, and was really surprised! ergh
 now he has someone else next to him, but its okay... i guess, haha i'll go cry some more  j/k...hes my friend still, thats all well ever be *sigh
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inn0centmarianne sunset beach Apr 9 2004, 03:29 PM
mai_z that's really sweet... excuse me while i go an... Apr 9 2004, 03:47 PM inn0centmarianne aww gee, thanks! but no need to cry! hell ... Apr 9 2004, 04:55 PM darkestdesire So sweet, i wanna cry too Ill try to hold it in. Apr 9 2004, 05:15 PM krnxswat Nice poem; awesome background, btw. Apr 9 2004, 05:49 PM LQ_Darksoul lovely! Apr 9 2004, 06:20 PM CEP That was beautiful...
- Chinkieeyedpnoi Apr 9 2004, 06:26 PM Winter That's so sweet. But I'm not gonna cry or ... Apr 9 2004, 07:07 PM ichiban The poem is so pretty! Plus the background... Apr 9 2004, 11:37 PM Just_Dream aww, that's so sweet and sad It reminds me o... Apr 9 2004, 11:44 PM inn0centmarianne hey, now that I think about that, you are right ch... Apr 10 2004, 12:49 AM TiNaBaBY074 aww..very cute.. Apr 10 2004, 12:52 AM inn0centmarianne I feel sad all over again this sucks haha Apr 10 2004, 04:04 AM mznina i love the last verse... Apr 10 2004, 09:01 AM perdyperdybirdy Ohh...Nice poem... Apr 10 2004, 04:03 PM LoST SouL i think im gonna go cry now Apr 10 2004, 08:19 PM dani41790 that poem ish beautiful, i think im gna cry too Apr 10 2004, 09:39 PM SeoulJah4God Every1 lets cry together (where the heck is the gr... Apr 10 2004, 09:44 PM Mireh I..need...tissues... Apr 10 2004, 11:16 PM juicy that's really a nice poem, & i myself writ... Apr 10 2004, 11:18 PM
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