wow.. long time no write.. |
 Feb 13 2005, 03:39 AM
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 define our lives for us.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293  |
Wow.. really, I havent written a poem in a LONG time.
Haha, and no, I didnt start writing one. Well, yeah, I did. =\ I think it sucks though. Hm, I dug out my old poem book and found poems I've written when I was 10 and now(11). o.o it probably really stinks.. but uh.. here goes.  Suicide The sharp edges With the screaming sound, It goes away, then comes around, I see more people go, Than I see people die, But they make their own choices, to fall or to fly. It's their own world, it's their own life, whatever they decide to do, was their own sacrifice. [sp?] yeah.. heh. I'm going to continue writing the poem since 2004. <3 first poem of 2005. ^^ edit: |
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Feb 13 2005, 11:35 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
wow thats really, good, but i dont think u spelled sacrafice right... or maybe i m wrong?
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electric shock wow.. long time no write.. Feb 13 2005, 03:39 AM
Wishful_Dream yup you spelled everything correctly, i think.. or... Feb 13 2005, 09:25 AM
stephinika wow, nicely done especially for a 10/11 year old. ... Feb 13 2005, 09:45 PM |
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