Les Morceaux, Fragments |
 Aug 25 2005, 09:49 PM
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 Tight Pants | Romance | Let's Dance  Group: Member Posts: 73 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,066  |
[Les Morceaux]
(Fragments) I can capture so much emotion within these words. The feelings of despair. Or perhaps the moment you're aware. I can feel your heart beating on my back. I clench your hand even tighter. My heart has never felt higher. The way you wrap your leg over my waist. I pull the sheets farther up my chest. I can't imagine a morning without you. You breathing across my neck. Life becomes almost pointless when I'm alone. And a reason to live is what you have shown. I can feel my toes curl. I can hear your soft whispers. I can feel my heart fluttering. As I turn to kiss you, I wonder what you think. As I raise from this place and pull up my shorts, my heart begins to sink. Please, spare me the tears. In that bed are my inexperienced fears. A heartfelt goodbye wouldn't do you justice. Lay there, forever. |
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Aug 25 2005, 10:26 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Bravo!
Encore...Encore! |
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Aug 27 2005, 03:13 PM
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Tight Pants | Romance | Let's Dance Group: Member Posts: 73 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,066 |
The link to more is on my sig. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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| *Tainted Euphoria* |
Aug 27 2005, 04:52 PM
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That's was beautiful. Wow...
The way you described it truly brought me into the experience. You are a skilled writer, indeed. |
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