Waiting, poem |
 Aug 18 2005, 08:29 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
spice of life
indesicive flavours f**k waiting for a saviour chew some gum sit under the old oak for a nap save yourself with relaxation celebration variation time flies by friends drive by drive by shootings shot through the heart while waiting under the old oak tree spinning in a vacuum sighing your wy into space endless universe endless life lying under the old oak just waiting... |
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Aug 18 2005, 09:10 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Aug 18 2005, 9:29 AM) f**k waiting for a saviour chew some gum  That's a world-class quote! QUOTE save yourself with relaxation This is another good one. You could make some excellent stickers w/ these. |
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| *stephinika* |
Aug 18 2005, 01:58 PM
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nice job james. i like the storyline of this one and your use of words. keep it up.
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Aug 18 2005, 04:59 PM
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 Ms. I Can't Tell Pants From Math Group: Member Posts: 371 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 191,034 |
Haha, I love it. Agreed w/ illumineering, I'm up for stickers, it sounds sexy. I like your writing, it interests me. Do I make sense? O_o
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Aug 18 2005, 05:09 PM
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 All I want for Christmas is an Underground Band. Group: Member Posts: 1,046 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,797 |
^ Might wanna resize the sig?
Great. <3 the gum part. |
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Aug 18 2005, 10:56 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
James, you've got flow.
I love it. So freaking awesome that I'd rather read you than me. |
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Sep 4 2005, 10:38 PM
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wow tat was awesome!!!! i really liked it!!!! keep up the good work
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Sep 5 2005, 10:47 AM
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 Some 1 plz find me, help me find my way..my way bak 2 bliss Group: Member Posts: 288 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,748 |
QUOTE f**k waiting for a saviour chew some gum thats awsome |
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Sep 6 2005, 10:08 PM
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 What up, dawg? Group: Member Posts: 235 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,480 |
I think it's great! The last two lines really tie everything together.
Great job! Rin-chan |
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Sep 11 2005, 01:14 PM
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 no news is good news... Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 |
I liked it.
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| *torngemini* |
Sep 13 2005, 02:47 AM
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that was freakin' awesome
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