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A monologue for a certain someone. I have no idea what I'm doing, and no idea as to how to control what I feel. If only I could let him know what he does to me.
------------------- How is it that our brief encounter has branded an image of you in my mind, in my heart? Am I that much of a fool to let you get so close to me? I'm not sure if I have an answer to that. I feel the proverbial spark beginning to burn and I don't know whether to fan it, or blow it out. It would seem to easy to brush this off and never speak to you again, wouldn't it? No matter how many times I tell myself that, I still find that I turn the corner hoping to see you there. I open my eyes seeing your face. I'm infatuated in such a way that it would be considered disturbing. It should disturb me, but it doesn't. I've begun imagining what life would be like by your side. I have yet to see your flaws. I have yet to hear your dark secrets, but for some reason, I don't think I'd care. You've completely shaken my world. Demolished walls that I've spent years building. Smeared the blueprint that I had drawn up for my life. I'm enamored and I'm helpless to stop it. Please, my heart flutters a million miles a minute for you. Don't kill it. |
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Aug 13 2005, 09:59 PM
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yerp!  Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
Naomi, ilu, I love this.
 I can totally relate and feel what you're feeling through your words.
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| *mishyerr* |
Aug 13 2005, 10:14 PM
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Aww, sweetie <3
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| *stephinika* |
Aug 14 2005, 04:22 PM
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wow naomi, that was amazingly written and i can just feel the emotions in it. great job, and i do hope things work out for you.
 remember, i'm always here to talk. 
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| *torngemini* |
Aug 14 2005, 09:21 PM
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That is amazing!! I can totally relate!! It's so beautiful!
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Aug 15 2005, 01:50 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 339 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 162,772 |
Naomi, I'm really loving this piece.
I hope everything gets sorted out with him and HIM. fallen fairy |
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Aug 15 2005, 05:41 PM
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 Kris is getting bonified. Group: Member Posts: 3,172 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 67,366 |
Aww, Naomi.
 You know I'm always here for you. Hope things work out well, love.
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Aug 15 2005, 05:42 PM
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Awww, Naomi.
Things will turn out for the best. Don't worry. 
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Aug 19 2005, 12:29 PM
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 Lauren loves YOU. Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
That was absolutely beautiful. I loved the part about the spark and the last paragraph. I'll say it again, you're a wonderful writer.
I hope things work out for you two.
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Aug 21 2005, 03:53 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
QUOTE(Tainted Euphoria @ Aug 13 2005, 10:51 PM) I have yet to see your flaws. I have yet to hear your dark secrets, but for some reason, I don't think I'd care.  Ooohh...the heartache...I can see it building on the horizon. Realizing the "perfection" of another is a reflection of what we seek to know of ourselves. When we can achieve that knowledge, the ups and downs of romantic relationships tend to smooth out. Please don't give away your gifts to anyone or anything you are not willing to see completely. Life is too precious to blindly live outside of ourselves. |
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