beneath that simple soul. |
 Aug 5 2005, 10:53 AM
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 You're so post-modern.  Group: Member Posts: 21 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 192,138  |
beneath that simple soul lays a secret.
might it be one my ears will never hear? though has he kept it since the day we met? would it be something that someday i'll fear? maybe its something i want to hear him say. or it's something i'll regret hearing. hope its three little words from deep within. does he care at all? will he show feelings? it seems like he'll never really come through. i guess i'll just stay here and wait, just wait. just waiting is all i can really do. not knowing this one secret is what i hate. but for now that small secret stays unheard. that little secret is what my heart yearns. its a sonnet i wrote in english class. i thought it was really fun writing. |
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Aug 5 2005, 07:24 PM
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CHYEAAHHH MAN Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013 |
damn thats good o.o
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Aug 6 2005, 07:37 AM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
Love it! Good job. I like the last two lines the best for some reason.
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Aug 7 2005, 08:19 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
 I hope you got a good grade...that's excellent!
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