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 Jul 26 2005, 06:43 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good.  Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137  |
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1412/1008ga.jpg
this is my first ever vector plz critisize so i can get better or give me sum helpful hints [esp on how to do the eyshadow, cuz i didnt know how to do that at all] thank you |
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Jul 26 2005, 06:49 PM
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It's pretty good. The skin needs a little work, and I love the eye shadow!
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Jul 26 2005, 07:00 PM
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its good for your first! its just choppy in both the hair and the skin. it should looks mooother with less of a contrast in the shadings.
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Jul 26 2005, 07:07 PM
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 Seeker of Salvation Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,068 |
Wow. Your so much better at that than me haha
my attemps turn out horribly. <3 |
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Jul 26 2005, 09:32 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
Wow, that is really good for your first. I'd suggest making your curves/shapes smoother and less rough. And don't make the shadows on her nose so dark. Nice job =]
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Jul 26 2005, 10:15 PM
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^^
agreed. thats pretty damn good for your first. just try to keep the edges smoother and whatnot. keep it up.
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Jul 26 2005, 10:27 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
Very decent job. Lovely job on the lips/teeth. The shadow is in really distinct shapes/colors, but it still looks pretty cool. That gray outline on one of her sections of hair is weird.
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Jul 26 2005, 11:12 PM
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yerp! Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
The skin looks a little rough, but the eyeshadow is nicely done. Nice work.
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Jul 27 2005, 12:58 PM
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That is awsome for a first. Wow. The skin could be a little curvier and the hair too.
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Jul 27 2005, 02:02 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
The skin does seem a little chunky but the rest looks faboulas.
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Jul 27 2005, 03:55 PM
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 Lauren loves YOU. Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
I actually think that's a really fantastic job for your first vector. I'd just suggest making more layers for the shading of the skin and hair highlights because it looks just a tad choppy. If you want the eye shadow to look more natural, maybe you should try using a gradient?
Again, this looks really awesome for your first. Keep up the good work! |
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Jul 27 2005, 10:04 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
First? Wow, pretty damn good. The nose texture is amazing [I stink at noses] and so are the lips. I suggest more layers and a circle airbrush with low opacity for eyeshadow.
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Jul 27 2005, 10:11 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Gorgeous for your first! Well everyone already gave you helpful tips, and I have nothing to add except keep it up!
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Jul 27 2005, 10:15 PM
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gigi =p Group: Member Posts: 3,679 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,206 |
OH. MY. GOD. IT'S MARYLAND.
HI MARYLANDDDDDD ILU ILU ILU ILU ILU WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME YOU JOINED?? Yeah it's Gigi by the way. I think it's majorly awesome for a first vector. =] |
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Jul 27 2005, 10:44 PM
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 HAAAAAAAA. Group: Member Posts: 4,472 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,068 |
That's really nice for your first one. The skin looks a little weird to me. I like the eyeshadow, though.
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