dreams, not your average rap |
 Jul 18 2005, 05:51 PM
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I wont give up//
Fall down shut up// I mean down// Having a frown on my face// I will just keep going at this steady pace// Watching people race then crash// Getting bashed against the wall of life// Having “wives”, and cheating// Being deceiving// So ill be leading// While everyone is still deceiving// I may only be 14// “Hey you’re just another teen!”// Y’all just being mean// But I’m not going to give up// Or fall out// I have dreams// Like the games dreams// And games is my dream// I will become a soccer player// So ill think it// Seize it// Breath it// Maintain// Keep it// Hold it// Control it// And never let go of it// |
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Jul 18 2005, 05:52 PM
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 GREEENROCKS Group: Member Posts: 1,393 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,624 |
thats awesome, but i dont really know rap, but good job!
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Jul 19 2005, 05:39 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 499 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,961 |
I know don't ever let someone tell you to stop dreaming & face reality...cause sometimes dreams are better than reality...I hope your dreams come true..I'm 14 too & I'm dreamin to be a singer...but I'ma make my dream happen...my name is Morgan Lee..remember it cause one day I'ma be on yur TV screen..(lol)
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Jul 21 2005, 11:17 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 161 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 153,708 |
that reminds me of when i was 14. all i wanted to do was make music , and im doin that right now at 17. hold onto what uve got , NEVER give up - seriously, everythings been against me and look, im here doin it now.
stay real you two. ps have you got any music uploaded soemwhere that i could listen to? |
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Jul 21 2005, 04:38 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
Wow that was amazing and very moving. I like the spark of defiance. I'd love to actually hear it instead of just reading it.
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Jul 21 2005, 04:39 PM
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 not da vinci's mona lisa <3 Group: Member Posts: 644 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,781 |
nice work!
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Jul 23 2005, 12:41 AM
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holy shit that was so ill
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Jul 23 2005, 01:23 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow, that's very emotional and the rhymes and flow go together perfectly. Keep up the good work. We need good rappers on CB.
 
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