my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss] Options

[*Statistik*]

LEAVE CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OR DON'T POST AT ALL. DO NOT USE OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE IN THESE "BATTLES", WHICH INCLUDES OFFENSIVE RACIAL SLURS.

YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED.

-Fae


Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//
Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//
My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//
I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//
Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//
You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//
If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//
When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//
Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//
Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//
And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//
I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

This post has been edited by uninspiredfae: Jul 15 2005, 12:30 AM

[*wind&fire*]

you can drive?

[DrNick311]

This is yet another example of why you need to get a life.

[Just Blaze]

If you are interested, I am looking for new rappers and DJs for my new label. Here is a link. http://www.nobodysmiling.com/hiphop/news/71563.php

If you are interested, mail a tape to the address below.

Baseline Recording Studios
127 W 26th St Rm 801
New York 10001

[Hiphop d[-_-]b]

omgoodness. please do NOT give the boy hope. then he'll think hes achieving at something hes not good at.

cant you talk about things normal 13 yr olds go through ? if you lived in a ghetto ass place w/ all these gangsta shit yu talk about then id understand your raps. but yu live in a nice suburb in jersey and go to a nice school probably lfull of kids who beat you up because you act like your from some ghetto ass town.

[*RockizLife*]

God. Help this young man boy.

[Paradox of Life]

"Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//"

A burning hot joint? You smoke? Would you like me to alert the police?

noun: marijuana leaves rolled into a cigarette for smoking
noun: junction by which parts or objects are joined together
noun: a disreputable place of entertainment
noun: (anatomy) the point of connection between two bones or elements of a skeleton (especially if the articulation allows motion)
noun: a piece of meat roasted or for roasting and of a size for slicing into more than one portion
noun: the shape or manner in which things come together and a connection is made

Sorry, but those lines made no sense. Because you have no point.


Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//

Jason, no one WANTS to feel your rhymes and lines. Violating the law over 5000 times isn't something to be proud of.

My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//

What girls? You'll make them tight? Jesus, please spare me.

I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//

You don't even know what hardcore is. And everyone has nightmares and dreams, you idiot.

Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//

What is trace-in supposed to mean? You're making up words now? Oh, according to Radhika, it means a murdered body. After getting a correct definition, it STILL doesn't make sense. WAY TO GO, SON!

You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//

"Get feared" makes no sense. You need to learn your grammar, son.

If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//

No, Jason, you're a pity.


When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//

Lmfao. I HOPE YOU GET DISMEMBERED, BITCH!

Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//

YOU PLAY WITH DJ? And was the second line supposed to be an insult? You don't
tell someone you're dissing to improve their rhymes so you can pay them.


Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//

No, Jason.. No, you're not the CHIEF.

And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//

Where did this line come from?

I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

That made no sense whatsoever.

Alright, I'm done with my analyzation of your rhymes. Don't take it personally. While other people freestyle, I'd rather use logic.

[sadolakced acid]

GOD. boy, get your syncapation right, your rhymes right, and your rythm right. don't forget the meter too.

[lbjshaq2345]

Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected

yeah it makes no sense dude GET A LIFE if you suck stop rappin get a ghost writer or somethin damn c'mon

[*CrackedRearView*]

Do you have to ruin the writing forum with this drivel?

Use another forum -- there are probably some idiots in the entertainment section that would appreciate this.

But if you're going to post here, try and make it something with a little more substance and seriousness than this crock.

Thanks.

[J-DraGoNz]

Lol everywhere I go this kid gets nothing but hate.

Here's something....more on the positive side I suppose.

I'm glad your interested in hip hop, it's a great thing bro. But you gotta realize that true hip hop comes from the real. Can't be talkin' bout shit you got no idea about and try to play it off. Be real, be yourself. Polish your flow, practice makes perfect. I've been in the game for about two years now and I still suck like no other. But I keep at it. It's my passion. Hip hop is life. If you're serious about it, hit me up and we can work together. My hyungs and friends that emcee or dj or produce always helped me and still help me so I'm always down to help out another cat if I can. my AIM is JxDragonz. hope to hear from you. One.

[xquizit]

^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter.

[AngryBaby]

^ ya she did

i thought he said he was gonna write his own lyrics from now on.

he should at least get a better writer.

[Hiphop d[-_-]b]

But you gotta realize that true hip hop comes from the real. Can't be talkin' bout shit you got no idea about and try to play it off. Be real, be yourself. Polish your flow, practice makes perfect. I've been in the game for about two years now and I still suck like no other. But I keep at it. It's my passion. Hip hop is life. If you're serious about it, hit me up and we can work together

EXACTLYYY.

hiphop=<3. hee hee thats my myspace name. anyway back to topic.
freal. write about what you KNOW. not what you see and hear on media or music and such.

[De112]

dissing me back, eh jason?! hahaha. don't worry. I made a diss back for you. check it out =] nice one.

[De112]

FROM NOW ON, ALL THE DISSES SHALL BE POSTED IN THE LOUNGE. TO MAKE "CERTAIN" PEOPLE HAPPY. =]

-De112

okay, so jason dissed me back. once again, this is all for fun.

here's my diss to jason, a new one. it's not my best one... =/
you may have to read jason's diss to get what i'm saying in some of my lines.

as a matter of fact, READ JASONS DISS FIRST, then you'll get mine =]

Jasons: Jason's Diss

mine is below.

listen kid, I swear your cds gonna flop//
you say your "rhymes so sick"//
someone get this kid a cough drop!//
maybe then, you'd understand//
"DeJay" isn't just my name, its my one man band//
what's all this crap that you "live in the ghetto"?//
man when I'm done with you, you'll be rockin' stilettos//
HA, "Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//
I don't know, maybe it's just 'cause you don't write your own lines!//
So stop actin' like you're something, you're not man//
you're just a fan, like eminem's old song called stan//
so take some time, write some good hooks//
i'll give you a pen, plus a free notebook!//
Dissin' you, has to be a crime//
So "ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//


=] ahaa.

comments.

[AngryBaby]

lol yaaaaaay!

*claps*

[beautifuls0ul_x3]

DJ, everyday you seem to amaze me. <3 That shit is awesome, yo.

lets keep this up, waiting for Jason's diss now. mwahahaha.

HA, "Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//
I don't know, maybe it's just 'cause you don't write your own lines!//

jason you have just been pwned. whatcha gonna do about it?

Dissin' you, has to be a crime//
So "ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//

oh shit this is getting better and better.

[beautifuls0ul_x3]

jason, honestly you went all over the place and it made no sense, it had nothing to do with DJ. you guys need to check out DJ's diss back. mwahaha

-oh and btw jason, i have nothing against you...i aint gonna lie but DJ did a better job at dissing you.

nice try though

[HongKongDong]

Shit is awesome man! hahahah
Jason just gets pwned time and time again
Love it

[*Azarel*]

Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish mindless rhymes, kids. Post this bullshit in entertainment or something. Or even better, don't post it at all. Grow up.

[De112]

Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish mindless rhymes, kids. Post this bullshit in entertainment or something. Or even better, don't post it at all. Grow up.

whoa calm down, kid. it's a joke, me and jason are both doing it for laughs, everyone else finds it funny so calm down. the forum doesn't always have to be so uptight man.

[*jooleeah*]

That was amusing. Wow...

[*Azarel*]

whoa calm down, kid. it's a joke, me and jason are both doing it for laughs, everyone else finds it funny so calm down. the forum doesn't always have to be so uptight man.

I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold.

This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."

[De112]

I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold.

This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."

that's your own personal opinoin though. as though I do respect it...i don't care for it. writing is writing, raps or poems or anything. everyone has their own way. like i said, the forum doesn't have to be so uptight.

[*nightmare4taki*]

That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this

I AM NO LONGER JASON'S GHOSTWRITER. I already showed everyone the one I ghostwrote for him in that one thred.

I haven't written another freestyle for jason since the track "Ghostwriter".

If he has a ghostwriter it must be another person.
Im not going to front though Jason you have improved but I still dont think youre ready to battle Yula's cousin or DJ.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason try again man you just got murked in Round one. Dj you dropped some very creative and artistic lines. I would be up for a battle with you DJ but Im not the battling type of writer when it comes to rap.

Round One Winner: DJ

I find this keystyle entertaining and amusing to say the least.

[*chaneun*]

DJ, guess what?

All you sucker MCs got nothing on me//
on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G.
I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard//
I'm like James Bond the 3rd.

sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor//
The G's silent when I sneak through your door//
and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor//
I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me//
Cos the next time you see her she'll go//
"Oh, Kevin G"

DJ, you got served.

[De112]

DJ, guess what?

All you sucker MCs got nothing on me//
on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G.
I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard//
I'm like James Bond the 3rd.

sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor//
The G's silent when I sneak through your door//
and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor//
I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me//
Cos the next time you see her she'll go//
"Oh, Kevin G"

DJ, you got served.

ahahahhahahahahhaa =] impressed. ahhahaa.

[mocassinsx29]

^ Such a good sport. :)

Nice rhymes, I'm sick of:

"You ain't got
What I got
So go, GO
Go smoke some
... pot."

kind of stuff.

[lbjshaq2345]

ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is entertaining and jason stays in writing cuz thats all it deserves i haven't seen one entertaining thing in writing besides this right here so...yeah

jason: 0
dj: 1

next round BEGIN!

[*wind&fire*]

DJ, guess what?

All you sucker MCs got nothing on me//
on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G.
I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard//
I'm like James Bond the 3rd.

sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor//
The G's silent when I sneak through your door//
and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor//
I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me//
Cos the next time you see her she'll go//
"Oh, Kevin G"

DJ, you got served.

that aint even yours

[*chaneun*]

^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I can't think of any ghetto-like rhymes.

[AngryBaby]

Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish mindless rhymes, kids. Post this bullshit in entertainment or something. Or even better, don't post it at all. Grow up.

u take the internet too seriously

[Paradox of Life]

I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold.

This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."

Jesus DJ, I thought you got the hint last time. This is immature litter. STOP IT.

[lKVNiiKINKYl]

dammmnn you busted on himm

[*basick*]

I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold.

This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."

This is the writing forum... you can't dictate what is "worthy" to be in writing...

[Paradox of Life]

...Oh C'mon guys...
These disses are supposed to be humerous..but no, drama has to be brought into EVERYTHING as usual..

You're not gaining anything by saying, "Jason sucks", in every thread..

It's not that he's actually dissing Jason; it's just not necessary to make these stupid "raps". If they wanted to joke with each other, they could just do it in private because people like DJ are just littering the writing forum with this annoying shit. Other people who made Jason dissing raps had their topics closed. I don't see why this hasn't been closed yet.

[*Statistik*]

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//
I'm having fun knocking you and killing you//
These cB fans are thinking your garbage, booing you//
I treat you like a animal, because you can't listen at once//
Look, i didnt come here to battle with no cunts//
Knowledge is a power//
I grow from slow to extreme like a flower//
My lyrics are pure, danger explicity//
I produce thunder and lightning at the same thing like electricty//
My flow goes rapid and the speed of motion like velocity//
Yo, dj i dont care if your name is dejayyyy or shit//
I'm matrix reloaded, im trying to come back and make a strong hit//
My Hits Make Girls Groove And Move Your Songs Make Drool And Snooze//
DJ, This Is To Easy Its Like U Choose-To-Lose !! //
You gon give me a free notebook? that really helps//
You can call me the Mr. Olympic Man, Ha I'm Michael Phelps//
The more notebooks and pens i get, the more disses I'll set//
After it's all written, i can finally prove to you bitches that it wasnt bitten//
So dejayyy why don't you bow down, i have to admit you're worse than bow wow//
Give up your career, I really don't know why you belong here//
My lyrics is cold, quick to drain ya soul in a round, dog//
Slow ya roll or I'll put you in a hole like a ground hog//
DJ, my last words are that this game between you and I is ova//
I deserve to get retired yet come back to the game like h-ova//

hehe..it all ends here dj..all ends..

[*basick*]

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//

that was so dumb i gotta laugh... pardon me i had to laugh at that

Knowledge is a power//
I grow from slow to extreme like a flower//

[wayne]

umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but you lost it when you started comparing yourself to a flower..

[De112]

ha, u really wanna get pwned eh?

[AngryBaby]

that was so dumb i gotta laugh... pardon me i had to laugh at that

             
             

may i laugh with you?

[*basick*]

that was awesome-n-hot.

[beautifuls0ul_x3]

this may i say is the worst diss in history.

Knowledge is a power//
I grow from slow to extreme like a flower//

ROFLMFAO


DeJayyyyy: ima diss that flower line.
DeJayyyyy: big time

it isn't the end Jason, not yet...

[Fallen Fairy]

pwn?

fallen fairy

[*Azarel*]

u take the internet too seriously 

Child, this subforum and debate are the only two decent forums on cB. I have every reason to defend it.

This is the writing forum... you can't dictate what is "worthy" to be in writing...

Uh huh, but I am allowed to have an opinion. And obviously, that was mine.

[*stephinika*]

^^x2

because no one who could close it hasn't seen it yet...
please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.

closed

[*stephinika*]

please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.

like i said earlier...please stop guys. thanks.

closed.

[J-DraGoNz]

^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter.

ah, I see. Well then...that just changes everything. what the heck are you doing posting up lyrics as your own when someone else write them for you? o.O I fail to see any accomplishment in that. I mean, it's one thing to have someone ghost write for you and you lace a track with those lyrics but to just post them...umm...yea. Okay.

[*wind&fire*]

^cos hes an inserure 12 year old korean with no real life except to diss on people

[heyyfrankie]

guys, stop with the member bashing. i'm closing this because that's what all the replies consist of. ;\

TOPIC CLOSED

[*kryogenix*]

http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php...1&#entry1454861

reopened and merging.

[J-DraGoNz]

dejay that was pretty dope

[De112]

so...what...it's...opened...again? so can i continue to finish my diss since jason dissed me back. or should i take in mind that anna said it's trash...

[*basick*]

please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.

why?

[Paradox of Life]

why?

1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

[*brownsugar08*]

1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that.












..

[De112]

Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that.
..

no, my feelings and esteem haven't been crushed. me and jason and mostly everyone else are laughing. i AGREE WITH U OH SO MUCH. =] if they don't like the rap, don't even click the topic!

you said everything that i was thinking!

[AngryBaby]

Child, this subforum and debate are the only two decent forums on cB. I have every reason to defend it.

proof that u take it too seriously

just dont read the topic if u dont like it, its that simple.

[J-DraGoNz]

I hope I didn't start a bunch of like...hatred amongst all you guys...me being a noobie on the forum and all

[Paradox of Life]

Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that.
..

I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap. Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me. If you guys want to do it so bad, keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear, but you don't have to go blabbing all this shit on the WRITING forum. Sure, the lyrical forum's a good idea. When I'm looking for good, inspirational writing, I shouldn't have to stumble across litter like this.



...

[J-DraGoNz]

I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap.

well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.

Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me.

if that happens you can regulate.

keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear

And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.

[*CrackedRearView*]

well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.
if that happens you can regulate.
And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.

You're bringing invalid, unworthy attention to this forum in a very invalid, unworthy manner.

What you don't seem to understand (Mr. 52 posts) is that some of us have been submitting well thought out prose/poetry in this forum for over a year.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//

Are you serious? This kind of nonsense can't be saved for an AIM conversation? It couldn't be done in the Forum Games section (where people couldn't spam "OHHHH DISSED!!11" and have it count for their posts)? This kind of idiocy is what is going to attract attention to this forum now?

Like I said -- if that's what we're reduced to now, I'll just f**king skip it.

And thanks, by the way. Thanks for bringing this shit in here.

[*CrackedRearView*]

Yeah, so let's make thread, after thread displaying a 'diss'.

[*not_your_average*]

I'll have to agree with Anna, Katt and Justin. This is stupid and uneeded. I've seen it in the chat as well. I like rap, but I have to speak up along with Anna, Katt and Justin.

well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread.

We've been doing that all along, and we're sick of it. So please, keep this PRIVATE. kthx.

[J-DraGoNz]

You're bringing invalid, unworthy attention to this forum in a very invalid, unworthy manner.

What you don't seem to understand (Mr. 52 posts) is that some of us have been submitting well thought out prose/poetry in this forum for over a year.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//

Are you serious?  This kind of nonsense can't be saved for an AIM conversation?  It couldn't be done in the Forum Games section (where people couldn't spam "OHHHH DISSED!!11" and have it count for their posts)?  This kind of idiocy is what is going to attract attention to this forum now?

Like I said -- if that's what we're reduced to now, I'll just f**king skip it.

And thanks, by the way.  Thanks for bringing this shit in here.

Gee, I didn't know you had to have a lot of posts to be respected around here or have your opinion count.

Thanks for everyone who supports hip hop and/or tried to back me up on this and stand up for something you believe in. Good looks fam.

And wow you people sure do take "post counts" incredibly serious. o.O

Just because it may be "nonsense" to you, not all people are so narrowly-minded and have the same point of view. But apparently, you don't seem to understand that.

and thanks for blaming me for this. I guess I am to blame for all of it huh. Haha. You guys man...I don't even know what to say anymore. hahaha whatever, peace.

[*basick*]

We've been doing that all along, and we're sick of it. So please, keep this PRIVATE. kthx.

Sick of what? Is not clicking a topic that hard? If it was up to me then the entertainment section would be only about underground hip hop, but it isn't, so all I can do is not click the topics about 50 cent and I'm good.

[*CrackedRearView*]

you quoted someone telling you to just not open the thread...

and you said you've been doing it all along? if you were doing it all along....then you wouldn't know if it was stupid, or uneeded. you wouldn't be sick of it either. you'd have no knowledge of it.

WHATEVER -- CHALK IT UP AS A WIN FOR YOU.

It's over.

[Hiphop d[-_-]b]

Sick of what? Is not clicking a topic that hard? If it was up to me then the entertainment section would be only about underground hip hop, but it isn't, so all I can do is not click the topics about 50 cent and I'm good.

i oh so agree.

just let the boys be. if you dont like the topic, go ahead post your opinion and dont click on it again if you have a distaste for whats going on inside the link.

[HoodieObsessed]

hey, I think you guys are being a little harsh.

Granted I don't like rap, and most of your lines didn't make any sense, but still, he's 13...I couldn't write that when I was 13

the rhymes were O.K. although some of the rythm was a bit off...especially the last three lines, they just didn't flow.

Try to write about things you know more about as they said above, and read it a couple times afterward to make sure you get the flow right. Make alot fo revisions and really think about the most apropriate words to use and such. Usually raps try to get across a certain message (not always) maybe you should choose a basis for your rap before you start writting it. Just sketch out what you want the rap to be about in story form, and then turn it into a rap when you've got the main idea.

Don't get upset because of all the negative comments you got, although this may not be a peice of art, there's plenty of time to improve, and if you really keep at it, by the time you've grown up you'll be awesome.

^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter.

He doesn't have a ghost writter anymore

I AM NO LONGER JASON'S GHOSTWRITER. I already showed everyone the one I ghostwrote for him in that one thred.

Give it up guys, it's a forum on the internet. This is a free world, he is a free person, he can post what he wants. You don't have to read it, you don't have to click on the link, hell you don't even have to go to CB, you dont' even NEED to go on the internet. This is all by choice. He chose to post his rap in this forum, and he has all rights to do that. It is not your every right to be jerks, I'm sure that's in the rules somehwere that you arn't alowed to diss someone for no aperent reason. So just stop it. You're probably really hurting his feelings and crushing his dreams. He could be really good some day, you never know, there's no reason to bash him to the ground. So stop being self centered, jugde-mentel complainers and give him a break

[xquizit]

He doesn't have a ghost writter anymore 

It's clear that he does. If you read his regular posts, you'll notice how limited his vocabulary and verbal skills are.


Constructive criticism? How about post your own original material.