Friendship, poetry |
 Jul 10 2005, 05:39 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
dead?
or just rotten to the core to the bone marrow with the stench of evil evil? or the absence of love? neglect hurts like a fist but without pain can we heal? let's heal a friendship cant sink according, interestingly to Friends but damn we can hit those icebergs so climb of the boat and sit on the iceberg and drift on a frozen sea with me |
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Jul 10 2005, 11:34 AM
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 sorry. i drowned your fish. Group: Member Posts: 1,485 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 98,683 |
i really like the ending ^.^ great job!
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Jul 10 2005, 11:45 AM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
You're a great poet. You just keep the reader wanting more, and then it ends, and it ends well.
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Jul 10 2005, 02:55 PM
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wow i really, really like this one. it flows soo well and the concept is great. fabulous ending too.
 awesome work as always james.
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Jul 10 2005, 06:04 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 10 2005, 12:55 PM) wow i really, really like this one. it flows soo well and the concept is great. fabulous ending too. awesome work as always james. I agree...and James, I just adore your style of writing. Great job on this poem!
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Jul 10 2005, 09:56 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jul 10 2005, 5:39 AM) neglect hurts like a fist but without pain ..................... but damn we can hit those icebergs so climb of the boat and sit on the iceberg and drift on a frozen sea with me I really got this.. and I wish I could "drift on a frozen sea" a lot. Excellent work. *Shakes her head, eyes closed* No.. I really think it's real. Real is Good. |
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