Death Is Solitude...Until You Die |
 Jul 7 2005, 08:51 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
Wasted time
Counting time? Keeping score of how Death creeps toward us How we creep towards death Slowly killing ourselves To make sure we owe the world Nothing Keep our plates clean So we can die Peacefully Although noone really does that Dies peacefuly We have one moment Of outraged And we learn What the galaxies Actually evolve around We are shocked We are perplexed It wasn't us Then We die |
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Jul 7 2005, 08:53 PM
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 [SheRRi_BeRRi] Group: Member Posts: 344 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,454 |
did you write this...? wow this is pretty intense, i like ^^
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Jul 7 2005, 08:54 PM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
QUOTE(ShEraBaRoO @ Jul 7 2005, 8:53 PM) did you write this...? this is pretty intense, i like ^^ Yes, I did. That's why I posted it. ... |
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Jul 7 2005, 09:00 PM
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[SheRRi_BeRRi] Group: Member Posts: 344 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,454 |
sorry, at first i didnt know it was under the writing forum...but me thinks its really good
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Jul 9 2005, 12:03 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
very vein.
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