this poem may not be suitable for all ages, [/lame] |
 Jul 5 2005, 11:13 PM
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 This bitch better work!  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095  |
a poem written after finding out a secret about a
 --- People, people, people: They're either good or bad. They can make you happy, or even really sad. The subject comes up All of them time He always denied it As if it was a crime The sounds and the voice In the back of your head Tell you the truth Not caring what was said. Once you hear the facts You realize people suck No words seem to come out Except mother fuck. --- yeah...i'm not a writer. 
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Jul 5 2005, 11:22 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Aww, Frankie. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you feel better soon.
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Jul 5 2005, 11:27 PM
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 d@niel Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
i see how you feel
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Jul 5 2005, 11:30 PM
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 RAWR. Group: Member Posts: 2,585 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,641 |
you rock my world. thats so awesome. I think its important for people to write how they feel, even if they arent the next ernet hemmingway. sorry people suck.
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Jul 6 2005, 12:19 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Aww. That's so sad. I thought the first stanza was so cute.
Sorry if I come off insensitive. I know exactly how you feel. It's happened so many times to me; you have no idea. Sorry about what happened.
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Jul 6 2005, 04:24 PM
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 sorry. i drowned your fish. Group: Member Posts: 1,485 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 98,683 |
i feel you.
 powerful poem.
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Jul 7 2005, 10:02 AM
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This bitch better work! Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095 |
thanks guys. =D
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Jul 9 2005, 01:16 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
whacha talking about, it great!
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