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 Jul 4 2005, 11:50 PM
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originally submitted in the cB news..submission.. thread it is here for feedback in honor of my 200th post.
Revolution You're lost, confused Alone and scared Life is so hard, right? We've all been there You say- No use living No use trying I say- No use whining No use crying Straighten up, dry those eyes So what if everyone lies? Sitting alone in the dark Never brought on a solution Stop complaining and Start A Revolution. |
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Jul 4 2005, 11:52 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Oooooh.
I love it!  Great word choice. x] Lovely job. 
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Jul 6 2005, 11:36 AM
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 The Lost Dreamer Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 166,502 |
Wow! Great flow of words. Worth more attention than it has received.
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Jul 8 2005, 04:56 PM
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_ Group: Member Posts: 520 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,274 |
My thanks to those who bothered to read. =) I'll try to get more posted if they're worthy.
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Jul 8 2005, 11:55 PM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
it reminds me of the song, "smile".
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