My Summer Romance, [a summer poem]...brief, but to tha pt. |
 Jul 3 2005, 11:16 PM
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 silly rabbit  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 94,435  |
"My Summer Romance"
The crescent moon shines ever so bright, As we lie beneath the stars, The night sky writes a message of love, Reflecting whats in our hearts. This Summer breeze against our skin, Caressing our every sense, Gives hope to 'us', to everything, To our Summer romance. |
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Jul 4 2005, 04:45 PM
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 It eats you, starting with your bottom. Group: Member Posts: 1,999 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 160,674 |
i like it, it has good flow and it is to the point!<<and its sweet! good job! ~_~
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Jul 4 2005, 06:49 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
I thought the length would be a downpoint, but I like it. Short and sweet. I love the figurative language you use. Great job!
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Jul 5 2005, 04:08 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
Ah, when I saw 'brief' I knew I had to click this. I've read enough page-long poems to last a lifetime. ;) It's sweet and to the point, I love it.
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Jul 9 2005, 01:26 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
how romantic.
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