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burning october
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post Jun 25 2005, 03:39 AM
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Burning October (03|28|05)

All the ways I see
of time to pass me by
all the things i see
that pass me by
every month that passes
passes me some more
till i get to october
the month of the year
that i always rip out
of my calander
and burn
in fury and in love
in hate and in passion
I'm always burning october
every month of the year.

buring october ©2005 me
 
 
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[Deep]Thought63
post Jul 9 2005, 01:53 AM
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Outstanding.
 
toodlepops.
post Jul 9 2005, 01:56 AM
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Wow, I love it.
 
yellowgurl
post Jul 9 2005, 02:03 AM
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very thoughtful. I like it =)
 
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post Jul 9 2005, 08:28 PM
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wow, that was really nice. good job.
 
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post Jul 9 2005, 08:30 PM
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nice poem~
 

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