Poetry, is it good? Options

[kabucchi]

Hey im new here but i read wat u guys/gurls rote so i think i know wats goin on sorta .
Anyway i write poetry my friends and quite a few other ppl say its realli good (im not gna waste space by spamming it here) but i just wanted to know what girls think about it, is it a good thing? because thats what i write about. so just tell me what you think about poetry and if u wna hav a look at it add me on msn kabucchi@portentmail.com
thnx

[*suddenly she*]

put it in the writing forum to get an overall response.

[kabucchi]

Here you go :)

Falling

Like a puzzle i cant figure u out, u jus make me wna shout.
whisper in my ear
whisper wat u wanna hear,
and if just to see u smile, ill stay for a while.
i got so much doubt!

you know u are my lover
i gotta be so strong
u have done me so much wrong

When i met u i instantly knew
the 1 i wanted was u
the feelings i had, i thought we shared
turns out im the only one who ever cared

to u its a game
play with me when ur bored
unfortunatly im startin 2 feel the same
soon ill b gone and thats assured.

what a shame we will never be the same.
bt guess who is always there for me.
your bestfriend and i are now a we!!!

you had it all, bt now im leaving you 2 fall.


Meeting

Your skin glows so bright, like the moon on a perfect night
Who you are deep inside, is beautiful and you should not hide
share with the world and share with me, wat a great person you can be.

Your not shy, but it takes courage for me
to talk to you, to walk to you, i wish you could see.
A moment in life wen time just wont stop, i want this forever.

I wont see you again, i know this is true,
a guy like me and a girl like you?
it dosent fit but i wish it would, i dunno you and i really should.

You seem real nice, and your cool like ice
its amazing how i think of you now.
Not your body which is a shock to me, but its something inside that i can see.

you made me smile, your funni nd sweet
your personality and looks are impossible to beat,
heaven sent and meant to be, the angel on earth for us to see.


RELATION

We see them day, We see them night
They never meet, i dont feel alright.
Distance is a problem, its something inbetween
The view from my heart is just serene.

The moon at night and sun in the day
If you ever came to me, i'll make sure you want to stay.
You were there but now you are here.
i'll hold you close so you have nothing to fear.

If you were the sun so high, i would be the moon so low
in the darkest of times you make me glow.
When we talk i just want to walk,
Meet you on the street and start to talk.

Without knowing you have been there for me
More than a friend, bt im the only one who can see.
A vision of love, hapiness forever
but like the sun and moon, only stars bring them together.


christmas night, look at the sky and if you see a shooting star pass by
make a wish for this couple to be, maby hapiness will come 2 me !


Decisions

As i walk the path there are decisions to make
This way ... That way ... Over there ...
The tempo is fast and its not realli fair,
So i make the decision, the decision to take
Time is of the essence, always running out.
Like you at my door, leaving as you shout.

Where you are going nobody knows
You panic and struggle because you know it shows,
The weakness revealed, and im still here
Unsure about before, what mattered matters no more.
On the edge, about to fall, the world is so large and you feel so small.
Your eyes meet mine and now you see, how perfect the world can really be.

I take your hand and help you to stand
The path is made for 2, its made for me and you,
So as the end has past, this beginning will have to last,
For now i can see my future is you, nolonger and no more will i be feeling so blu.
Your eyes are that colour, they must take it away.
Im happy ... though i know i will be dejected another day.


Choice
You want me close but i cant be there,
Day after day i tell you i care.
He has a hold thats hard to break,
And a new relationship is hard 2 make.
In my arms is where you feel safe!

Your so cold, so scraed - looking for someone who can be.
Your dreams are full but its hard to see,
Doubt is your problem, you dont think i am.
but i am determined to show you i can.
Open your heart, your mind, your soul.. loosing him is the only toll.

Time dosent matter, your emotions do.
But i hope you know how i feel for you,
Your dreams are mine, im sure you can see.
how happy tou can be with me.
In the darkness you see a light, i'll protect you through the night!

[HiddenSmile]

Dude, I read one of em, and it was good, to me. But you know, poetry doesnt have to be good to everyone, it has no rules whatsoever, as long as it sounds good to you, and u like it, it's good poetry!

Just lettin u know!

[Paradox of Life]

Aw, those poems are adorable. I personally don't find them very impressive, but I'm sure other people like HiddenSmile think they're good. I'm just a tough critic. You have strong emotions and you have no problem putting them down on paper, but the rhyming kind of throws it off. Some of your rhyming schemes are inconsistent. Try writing a free verse and not rhyming at all, so you can just put your feelings down on paper and I'm sure we can get a deeper message.

[Shattered_Hope]

But you know, poetry doesnt have to be good to everyone, it has no rules whatsoever, as long as it sounds good to you, and u like it, it's good poetry!

Just lettin u know! 

Agreed. I thought one of your poems was really nice too...