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 Jun 11 2005, 06:53 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
im gonna leave
before i go theres time to fail before you grow growth is a state of mind... growing down to the roots or up where leaves dapple light you have to forget before you can know dancin on a sunbeam to be immature for a day beats growth for a year hands down down to the ground laugh and forget doncha wanna know? no? rock a bye baby on the tree tops higher than me; a child look up to the child growin down to te ground six foot down |
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Jun 11 2005, 04:11 PM
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QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jun 11 2005, 6:53 AM) you have to forget before you can know dancin on a sunbeam to be immature for a day  that's my favorite part. it kind of reminds me of something my friend lizzie once said "childhood should be a J O U R N E Y not a R A C E" and as for the poem i really liked it it was very interesting |
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Jun 11 2005, 04:36 PM
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james, i love what you write. i really like the concept behind this one. nice work again.
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Jun 11 2005, 08:54 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 224 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,206 |
wow, reminds me of my layout...
nice work |
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Jun 21 2005, 07:50 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
your words have such color james. that's one of the biggest things I love about your writing.
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice) growing down to the roots or up where leaves dapple light you have to forget before you can know dancin on a sunbeam to be immature for a day beats growth for a year hands down down to the ground laugh and forget I can see it. 
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