Questions for the Conscious, Just some We need Answered |
 Jun 8 2005, 03:46 AM
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 Sunlight--shine on me.  Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201  |
I prefer:
Not crafted in madness, but madness stays still. Change not done by God, but done of my own will. How do you show someone what your mother saw? How can you explain a jail, a distraught, not drunken, call? How do you show conscience to someone with no name? Someone with no history, who knows no pride or fame? How can you show death to someone with great life? How do you show pain to someone who survived? How can you make another try to understand? What it feels like to be broken, mind, soul, and man? How do you form sickness in the heart of health? How do you forget, put sadness on the shelf? How do you tell people to answer to your call? When you fear they cannot hear any word at all... (Sorry: I don't really need criticism; This was just straight from my head and from experiences I've gone through. It's not anything I want to change because I don't care. I just had to get it out. My mom was kind of put in jail by my step father for a night and then they divorced and I just had all these questions...I had to explain the entire situation to several people [b/c my grades were going down and my counselers wanted to know why]. But Do you guys ever have questions? That you know no one can answer, but you have to say them...because for some reason it feels like it could make a difference if you just speak or write the words out) |
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Jun 8 2005, 04:12 AM
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aww...that so sad need a hug? *hugs* i really have no criticism.
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Jun 8 2005, 06:45 AM
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Sunlight--shine on me. Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201 |
*hug back* aww thanks. It's okay. I just have to keep telling myself to keep going even if there is no real hope that you see at the moment because maybe there is some-->you just cannot see it.
Took me a while to see it. It was in my friends 
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Jun 8 2005, 01:18 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
aw its sad :( i dont really have any critisism to offer you, i enjoyed it
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Jun 8 2005, 01:22 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 34 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,934 |
i liked the whole thing, but the first to lines
QUOTE I prefer: Not crafted in madness, but madness stays still. Change not done by God, but done of my own will. those were amazing<3 |
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