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 Jun 6 2005, 10:38 PM
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what do you think of this poem i made? :)
I'd do anything for you. Because I love you. Yes, I do. I hope you love me too. If you left me, I would cry. So don't leave until you wiped my tears and cried with my fears. Tell me you love me with your whole heart. From the very beginning, which is the start. Because I love you. And I wouldn't be able to live without you. Since I love you so much, That I can't bare without your touch. I loved you from the start. Now I'll love you till the end. I hope you love me too. |
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Jun 7 2005, 01:05 AM
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i like the idea i really do so sweet and innocent but how about something along these lines:
"I'd do anything for you because you are my love The apple of my eye The warmth in my heart I hope you feel the same way. I couldn’t bare life without you You are my support My rock My shoulder to cry on My confidante Please just stay and banish my fears Tell me you love me with your whole heart. Don’t let go just please hold on Because I love you. I crave your touch I'll love you until I take my last breathe I can only hope you will too " |
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