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whomps
post Apr 13 2004, 11:49 AM
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icky poem. wanna heaarr? xD

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do you see how fast the days have gone by
did you finally notice i'm about to cry
can't you see what i've been going through
can't you see why i've been blue
do you see the facts that've come to be true..
do you feel the way i feel for you?

i've realized that it's all been a lie..
i've realized that i can't get by..

you haven't seem how it has been
you haven't seen through the skin i'm in

maybe someday i'll finally see
there will never be a `you and me`
 
 
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waccoon
post Apr 13 2004, 11:54 AM
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We are the cure.
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*claps*
 
casssy
post Apr 13 2004, 02:02 PM
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thats good... o0 we should have a poem/lyric section 0.o
 
cleec
post Apr 13 2004, 02:10 PM
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wow that was really good! major props thumbsup.gif
 
*CJ1*
post Apr 13 2004, 03:04 PM
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QUOTE(liquidbluac1d @ Apr 13 2004, 3:02 PM)
thats good... o0 we should have a poem/lyric section 0.o

No additional sections... Additional sections hurt my head....

Good job with the poem... I wish I could write...
 
kyootE_krn_bebe
post Apr 13 2004, 03:27 PM
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sad poem..but GREAT!@ hehe...seriously...wow i almost cry.gif =)
 
angel-roh
post Apr 14 2004, 11:25 PM
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yeah we should do that cassie!! like like like soompi.com~!^^ make lyric and poem forum! lols haha but newais EVE!! i reallie luv ur poem!!! hehe awww it's realie good!! u're a good poem writer!!^^
 
bluecrystals
post Apr 14 2004, 11:56 PM
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good poem. i like it. i wish i think of stuff to write.
 
pyrochick19770
post Apr 14 2004, 11:58 PM
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oh Gosh i`m gonna CRY!!
 
xstab.my.heartx
post Sep 11 2005, 01:44 PM
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Rad.
 

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