Even Though,, I truly love you |
 May 19 2005, 10:51 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
even though i hurt you and said goodbye
you still came back to me and held my head up high even though i messed up and broke us apart you still gave me another chance to stay in your heart even though i left you and disappeared without a trace you still loved me and said no one would take your place if i had just one wish i'd stay by your side i'd make up each and everyday for the tears you've cried i had so many chances but i still didnt say sorry you still forgave me , and loved me endlessly it tears me apart that i wasnt there when you died but i always wanted to say i love you , i'll be here by your side as time went by i would imagine the smile on your face id remember how you'd say no one would take my place waking up every morning knowing that your gone it kills me inside becuase i still hold on i wish i could've been the man to say these words to you that i really do care and i truly love you |
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May 19 2005, 11:05 PM
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 This is all my luck, it's all I got. Group: Member Posts: 1,373 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,532 |
Very lovely, I like it.
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May 19 2005, 11:10 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682 |
omg rawrr, thats so sad .
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May 20 2005, 01:37 AM
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very sad and emotional, in a good way though. quite well written.
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May 20 2005, 10:57 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
I doubt you remember me...but this is so like you...I remember when that's all you wrote back then..but uhh back on subject...Good Job
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May 21 2005, 12:42 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hahah i do remember you mr cloud x like i think hella months ago i recon back in september or early august hahah you were the dude that wrote alot of love things as well hahah but yeah thnx
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May 21 2005, 01:00 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
hahahah Yes I was the other guy infamous for writing love poems. Glad you remember me. =D And...yeah I'm still stuck on the subject as well...
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May 21 2005, 01:56 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 84 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 141,405 |
Its so....sensational. Very well-written!
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May 21 2005, 04:48 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,907 |
oooh i really like it man.. its nice
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May 22 2005, 10:20 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
thank you for the kind replies glad you enjoy it =]
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