Lust |
 May 19 2005, 07:37 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682  |
day turns to night,
and lust becomes sin . beautiful crime, memory grows dim . passionate kisses, that reek with wanting. dirty sex, that just keeps haunting . purity lost, doesnt really matter . awaiting your touch, my innocence shatterered . this need becomes greed, stop luring me in . dont stop me from doing this dirty deed . lick the craving away from my lips, break the rules, go on, misbehaving . press your body against mine, watch as two becomes one . lost in our own wonderful world, make me lose track of the time . .... ... . .. .. . .. . my friend has one word for my poem  " DiiiRRRTYY " . hahahah
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| *not_your_average* |
May 22 2005, 04:59 PM
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yes, VERY dirty. but still good! you have such a great flow/rhythm in all your work.
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May 22 2005, 05:08 PM
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 Im Gavin HI!! Group: Member Posts: 802 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 111,644 |
LOL thats kinda gross X_X but it means soemthing and the words match the.. uh... theme.
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| *stephinika* |
May 23 2005, 01:41 AM
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i like it...its written well and flows quite nicely and really, its not THAT dirty lol. nice work.
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