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 May 13 2005, 06:33 PM
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 &&. I'm a mystery wrapped in an enigma with a touch  Group: Member Posts: 343 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,718  |
I finally figured out how to use the pen tool smoothly. This is like the first vector I did in Illistrator so I'm pretty proud of it. I'll edit when I'm done with it.
 Original Please, some constructive critisum!] *Kellie |
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May 13 2005, 06:35 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
It's not bad actually. The eyes look a little weird, though. Other than that, I like it. Put some shading in the hair later.
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May 13 2005, 06:41 PM
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I think it looks pretty good so far. You should make the eyes much bigger. And try shading the hair. The skin sort of contrasts a little on my screen.
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May 13 2005, 07:25 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
Yeah, fix the eyes and the hair, but i know your not yet done, so yeah. Everything else is fine. :)
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May 13 2005, 10:10 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
The eyes need a little work, but the skin and the curves in general are really good! =]
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May 13 2005, 10:35 PM
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 *.'.'._gillie_.'.'.* Group: Member Posts: 563 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 101,217 |
the eyes are so tiny..u should make them bigger.. but the rest looks pretty good
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May 13 2005, 10:39 PM
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 whaaaaaaat? Group: Member Posts: 2,293 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,660 |
fix the eyes, otherwise, nice job.
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May 13 2005, 10:42 PM
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 biatch Group: Member Posts: 142 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 86,321 |
work more on the hair and teeth.
great for a first tho. |
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May 14 2005, 12:01 AM
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 Um....Its meeee Group: Member Posts: 2,218 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,264 |
Its okay. Not bad looking. Maybe fix the eye and the eyebrown more? Keep it up.
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May 14 2005, 01:36 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
not bad. the eyes are a bit strange. but it's pretty good.
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May 14 2005, 08:19 AM
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 i need an sn change. Group: Member Posts: 1,915 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,746 |
the eyes are really small and the hair needs more work..
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May 14 2005, 09:08 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 6,953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,702 |
yeah.....fix the eyes
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Jun 4 2005, 10:50 PM
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 Go to Tahiti, and make out with a native. Group: Duplicate Posts: 914 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,267 |
its very weird looking
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Jun 4 2005, 11:39 PM
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 Taste Sweet Love ^-^ Group: Member Posts: 459 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,316 |
not bad .. just fix the eyes &the hair . otherwise it`s good (:
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Jun 5 2005, 01:06 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
looks good . but i agree w/ everyone about fixing the eyes abit.
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Jun 5 2005, 07:53 AM
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 Newbie Group: Member Posts: 3 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 144,340 |
BAD STUFF FIRST
hmm.. the hair needs some shading - that is unless u make it black - which needs little to no shading (depends on ur lighting). because ur shirt is white and the background is white u need to have an outline on the shirt to show which the "white" belongs to. ur nose also needs so distincition. I can't tell where is the peak and where the other side of the cheek is. the eyes needs to be the same size. i know many vector tutorials tell u not to use white as a bg but since ur using so little layers, u might as well make it white. the pupils are not the same size either. u need to fix that. the teeth needs a little distinction too. we don't have one all white tooth. we have many teeth. so u need to show that. i'm not asking u to shade every single detail. i'm asking u to show the lines at least. but since it has lighting u have to distinguish the lines from light to dark. meaning the tooth closer to the light must have lighter lines and the tooth furthest would have darker lines. i think u know what i'm saying. :) the red part is kinda messy. i can see two different hues. as in one of the red is redder and the other one is pinker. u need to uniform it or change the hueof the pink to match the red. GOOD STUFF NOW. beautiful lips. the color choice is great! it blends very well despite the little use of layers. the lines are well curved. looks very neat. |
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Jun 5 2005, 08:49 AM
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&&. I'm a mystery wrapped in an enigma with a touch Group: Member Posts: 343 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,718 |
^^OMGosh thank you fo the great feed back!
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Jun 5 2005, 09:32 AM
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 jiyOunnn~ Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,706 |
make the eyes bigger, add some more shadowing so you can see the difference between each part of the vector, and yea. shadow in the hair too
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